21 EXT POST YOUR SHORT DAY
The film of tomorrow appears to me as even more personal than an individual and autobiographical novel, like a confession, or a diary. - Francois Truffaut
A MESSAGE FROM BILLY MARSHALL STONEKING
A short film is not a miniature feature. It operates, rather, by an odd sort of logic that when successful rarely propels its audience towards the kind of expected and satisfying narrative resolution that so often characterises longer-form drama. Often, the resolution of a well-told short-form drama occurs in the mind of the viewer rather than on the screen. When a short film tries to behave like a feature, the result is often contrived, incredible or, even worse, utterly meaningless.
The films that I have chosen are illuminating and each, in its own way, presents the essential elements of short-form drama; each re-contextualising the dramatic problem that defines the main character. For a more detailed account of this, please see my essay, "STORY - the Long and the Short of It" - (See GRAMMAR)

If you have made an exceptional dramatic short-film that adheres to the essential grammar and principles of dramatic storytelling, that is fresh, surprising and thoroughly credible, please submit it for inclusion here. Or, if you feel you have made a film that in some way contributes something original and vital to the form, please share it.
The ones that are posted by "scripttools" represent some of my personal favorites; they are among the finest and most challenging works of modern dramatic short-form filmmaking in existence.
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Experiment in Terror
by scripttools
on Mar 10, 2010
1 Views - 0 Comments One of the biggest hits of the early 60s. And one of the most unusual trailers. Film directed by Blake Edwards |
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DEFECT
by scripttools
on Jan 25, 2010
30 Views - 0 Comments The film, DEFECT, was made as part of thThe film, DEFECT, was made as part of the script development process for a character-based feature film, and will be screened as part of the 2010 Soho International Film Festival in NYC in February. The film presents a succinct, self-contained sequence from the feature script (adhering to the fundamental grammar of short-form drama, with the re-contextualisation of the problem at the end). based upon what was learned doing this short, has made this section of the feature extremely powerful. Working with characters in this way is the kind of thing I have been advocating for years in various film schools - alas, to no avail (so far). It has always seemed to me that one must employ ALL of the tools at hand in the process of finding the characters. This is the great unheeded message of the new technology. Apart from anything else, the present clips demonstrates the power of a well-made trailer, and how even thi sform of storytelling employs the grammar of dramatic in order to make its point. Anyone out there wanna start a radical, new film school? e script development process for a character-based feature film, and will be screened as part of the 2010 Soho International Film Festival in NYC in February. The film presents a succinct, self-contTained sequence from the feature script (adhering to the fundamental grammar of short-form drama, with the re-contextualisation of the problem at... the end). The subsequent transformation of this sequence in the feature screenplay, based upon what was learned doing this short, has made this section of the feature extremely powerful. Working with characters in this way is the kind of thing I have been advocating for years in various film schools - alas, to no avail (so far). It has always seemed to me that one must employ ALL of the tools at hand in the process of finding the characters. This is the great unheeded message of the new technology. Apart from anything else, the present clips demonstrates the power of a well-made trailer, and how even thi sform of storytelling employs the grammar of dramatic in order to make its point. Anyone out there wanna start a radical, new film school? |
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Birthday Boy
by scripttools
on Jan 24, 2010
35 Views - 0 Comments For a discussion of this classic of short-form drama, see STORY - THE LONG & SHORT OF IT in the Grammar section of this website. |
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Ryan
by scripttools
on Jan 24, 2010
30 Views - 0 Comments To be or not to be is not always the artist's central concern; it is usually much more mundane than that - like: by what means do I successfully navigate obscurity, or worse, though less usual, by what cunning do I survive that last, great infirmity of the soul, fame? Based on the life of Ryan Larkin, a Canadian animator who, 30 years ago, produced some of the most influential animated films of his time, the film explores the notion of "falling" and its consequent anxiety of meaninglessness. Through the voices of prominent animators and artists discussing Ryan's work, and from waitresses, mission-house caretakers and homeless people who made up Ryan's life, we are reminded that "We don't see things as THEY are, but rather as WE are." |
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Father and Daughter
by scripttools
on Jan 24, 2010
33 Views - 0 Comments This deservedly Bafta award-winning animation from Dutch director Michael Dudok de Wit is beautiful, timeless and totally heart-rending. Drawn very simply in sepia tones, it shows a father and daughter cycling to the water's edge and hugging each other goodbye before the father sets off in his rowing boat... |
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Inked
by David Mackey
on Jan 19, 2010
35 Views - 0 Comments A printing shop attendant puts too much hope on her desire for good looks. |
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Layer of Dust
by lod
on Nov 23, 2009
73 Views - 0 Comments In a dark, stop-motion/claymation animated universe, a dying man has a vision of sorrow, lost love, and regret before his worldly life ends. But does the pain ever stop? |
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The Agreement
by Jase
on Nov 23, 2009
77 Views - 0 Comments "The most important single central fact about a free market is that no exchange takes place unless both parties benefit." - Milton Friedman
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Jelly's Placenta - #1 of 3
by scripttools
on Nov 22, 2009
73 Views - 0 Comments Writer/director, Christina Conrad, explores the darker absurdities of modern love in her eccentric and disarming cinematic confession. In this excerpt, Leith confronts her lover, Jelly, over a fig tree he has ordered for one of his students. Jelly: Craig Borehan Leith: Marc Carlis Hart: Ryan Lee Producer: Melissa Anastasi DOP: Steve Macdonald |
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Jelly's Placenta - #2 of 3
by scripttools
on Nov 22, 2009
63 Views - 0 Comments Christina Conrad's black satiric vision of modern love gone wrong. In this excerpt, Jelly's secret lover comes bearing a loaf of seed bread and is confronted by Jelly's partner, Leith whose jealousy and fear of betrayal - we discover - are rooted in Jelly's relationship with his dead mother. |
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Jelly's Placenta - #3 of 3
by scripttools
on Nov 22, 2009
52 Views - 0 Comments Christina Conrad's idiosyncratic black satire on modern love. In this excerpt, Jelly brings his partner, Leith, a trout only to discover that his secret lover, Hart, has already come bearing a seed loaf. |